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Old 07-15-05, 08:33 AM   #23
I-Cunt-Troll
Banned: Cheating
 
Posts: 195
From: Trinidad
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Voted For: K-Trin

Only time you glimmer is when ya grab ya son's-knee(sunny)
Ur idea of banging fee-males is handin ya boyfried money
^^Not hard hittin....but original punches nevertheless
Postin all over the site swearing you the shit,man U insane
Worse than 1st garde,hence,the 1st 3 letters in ur name
^^LMao!!!.....Dope nameplay
Stop thinkin ya superior,ya just another pig chewin on grass
Smacks you stimulate come from ya waist hittin a guy's ass
^^^Nice meta......

Welll.....2nd bar was the best.Hit hard,creative,and was original.That last bar could have been shortened up for a better flow.You didn't self glorify or talk gangsta...so that's good.Had a nice structure too.Not your best verse as the one against Memisis was better.

This nigga challenged me again come on bro is this a joke/
He got Canibus by his name, that just go to show that he gets smoked/
^^^NO........basic and whack...
He cheated first time around, I'm rhymin truth to u/
And his flow like that cheap soup, cause he be Ra-Men noodles/
^^Give a link proving that he cheats....nice wordplay
I really won the first time, he still can't get me/
It's like someone shitted in K-Trin's mouth cause everything he spit is SHITTY/
^^Too long and far too basic..

U need work.U only had one line with wordplay and that was the only good link you had.If you had comprimised a whole verse of that werdplay...you may have had a chance.See...K-Trin had a whole verse with wordplay.If he cheated provide a link.

Vote-K-Trin