Voted For: 4fil

yo cuz,leave da block,you a pest in da streets/
killin' you wit dis will be part of 4 fillin my destiny/
ok
yo you ain't a sindicator of crime/
how can you be in da streets plottin' when you can't write a decent rhyme/
hell naw...
look homie im more of a killer dan you need an example/
check out how im makin you commit suicide wit dis one rhyme,and dis ain't even da preamble/
no...second line was longer then my dick...(that's long)
ya life ya gamble,when ya tuoch mics wit me/
cuz what da fight seems to be,will be over within a mintue,better believe me
ummmm...ok



breakdown-verse wasn't really hittin...some punches were thrown but seemed like they were thrown by a blind man...didn't really have any complexity...should have done you reserach and looked and saw tha you would have to bring yo A game wit dis guy...nice drop none the less




The boys running and hiding.......... as if Will-a-peer just kissed him
With a Record of 1-0........... the only person he beat was the system
haha
Fucked up ugly, slimey and beat.......... Yeah i'm talking bout your head
I'll make this pussie bloddy........... and i'm winning this battle period
nice...but it didn't really rhyme
The only time your dope......... is when you put those drugs into effect
It's in his name to bite........... and the coward went and stole my accept
ok
It must have been cold when you got frostbite.. and actually quite scary
seeing this ugly fruit around believing somebody's gonna pop his cherry
ok


breakdown-nice verse...like how you had that word play in there...punches were thrown and landed...had one personal which hit...pretty decent verse.

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