Thread: War Cries
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Old 07-15-05, 10:34 AM   #10
N.Tavarez
the medicine man
 
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DAMN tweets, you really killed this one
very creative piece here, love that u told it from different perspectives, it added emotion to the story, covered a nice topic, used very good vocab to paint ya pictures
very sad ending

dope overall 9/10
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