Voted For: Intermental

pussy.. why you on a collision course wit the best/
if you act like a action hero I won't neglect to put the 'fantastic 4' to ya chest/
^^^too long and whack......not a punch
intermental will change his ways when Law round/
either that or catch more strays then a fuccin' dog pound/
^^^Weak as fuq......
you done mastered frontin' ta' people/
you mind as well try out for Football in Philly cause it's the only way you runnin' wit 'eagles'/
^^^Suks.....
yo skills are limited how you gon diss me b?/
when I pop I bet Intermental a drop like Dirk Nowitzki 3/
^^^forced rhyme and weak
then I'll keep unloadin' hollows/
talk shit and get 'capped' like a fuckin' Coca Cola bottle/
^^^wat the hell?stretched,uncreative,and weak
you wack and clear to see through like dasani too/
get outta line and CSI uh' tuck you in cover like ya Mommy do/
^^Weak....whack....
I can fucc you up..... ONE VERSE... lend a pencil/
or I can snuff you up... ONE HURSE.... after the shots "inter" "mental"/
^^^Terrible nameplay

Ok....change up your style and shit.It's whack.Get rid of the newb structure.U had some lines where you spoke about beatin Inter...which is a no-no.Had couple of forced rhymes too.U need work.


The only time lawless wud beat me is like david blaine and usin drastic magic,
My punches smack him in his stomach and now hes coughing up lactic acid,
^^strong rhyming there...but self glorified
Does he realise he battlin me.......Its like I sprayed mase in his eyes,
Hes like R Kelly, He thinks he can beat me, he really believes he can fly
^^Whack.......
Yo its a mistake battlin me cos imma expose u like eve and that sex tape,
you a fake, Yo jus write Inter in ure "notable losses" cos it seem like fate
^^^^This was weak.....
Mix lawless with rap and we automatically dissolve this,
Cos it dont go well together but he can't control shit,
^^^Weak....
Im kickin this guys ass with my shoes where the hole at?
Look at his shoes..............now wheres his soul (sole) at........,
^^OK......
He tryin to teach "tha law" but lawless full of "flaw",
So check youreself, i thought u waz hard, what you runnin for
^^^Meh...decent I guess

Had some decent lines there.Just get some fesh concept in there.Fix ya structure up too.Worst bar was 1st. because you spoke about beating the other guy.But you get the win for acuattly dissing.

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