ok this was an aight battle but for an upcomer in topicals daubs u did fantastic man my vote goes for u u had a good vocab but keep improvin in that and had a good imagery on it aswell and stanza ur versewas aight too....but u did it like u didnt have time or sumthin only like a few lines expand a lil more on them aight but 4real u need to do that aight good imagery as well from u but not showin alot of cretiveness here maybe is cuz it was kinda short make it at least a 20 line u kno.....but good job to the both of u but my vote goes to daubs just for havin a better imagery, vocab and very impress when ur new so/ daubs........

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