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Old 07-15-05, 12:22 PM   #7
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critic hitz at focal points
nigga i be breakin joints
simlpe at the point creative by the heart
i rip bitchez to the core i shred em apart
sik ill matic lines crazy ass rhymes
bitch im the opt1k throwin these punch lines
niggas be hatin on cuz i rep my crew
what the prob wit that bitch so do you too.
muhfucka opt1k one in the buildin any way
shit stanza WAR still my fam but no longer could i have stayed!!!!!!!!


i vote for DAUBS nice put together and it was longer....stanza u a tight rapper just make it longer i would have voted for you if it was longer and deeper with creativity.....yo peace out FAM...WAR still my fam just not in the crew any more startin out wit some other crew don't know yet but if shit goes bad or i get elevated to be an iller rapper i'll holla at RAW and drop it to show how i elevated niggaz this is opt1k!!!peace out WAR!!!!!NO DOSRESPECT TO YOU TEPH OR ANYBODY ELSE AT WAR/RAW BUT WHEN I ELEVATE TO A BETTER LEVEL I'LL HOLLA AT MY #1 FAM>>>RAW FOR ACCEPTIN ME TO WAR IN THE FIRST PLACE THANKS FOR THE OPPERTUNITY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!PEACE!!!!!!!!!
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