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Old 07-15-05, 03:14 PM   #24
Sean Gunner
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Voted For: -Cezar-

Conflict
Wit a name like conflict u no im gonna win/
Cause u cant belive the perdicimins ill put’ch in/
Self glorification and a "I will" line. No punch.
U call ur self cezar, I should be wearin da crown/
Cause when im finsihed wit ya eveyone will be pointed their thumbs down/ *
Ok attempt at a punch, but another "I" line.
Ur garbage, y u gotta lie/
The only time u get appluded is when u pass the mic
Not that original, flow is thrown off here.
U gona lose battlin mags wit heat seekers/
U fukin wit death like have sex wit da grim reaper/
Bad similie and attempt at a punch.
U got da appetite fo battles well I got da recipe/
Uve only seen a little uve neve seen da rest a me
Self glorification again and no punch.

Your attempt at wordplay killed you. Work on making real punches and personals rather then self glorification lines and "I will" lines.

Cezar
Your "new" to the game,I can tell by the "wai da kyd tipez"
He sound goofy wit that slang,Musta been cuz ya lost a fight
Bad personal and punch.
He acts 'homo',No need for condoms he dont get 'sexual' with girl
Holdup! is this Karomo,watch him catch a dick in his reAl wOrld
That isn't wordplay honestly. Your fishing. Bad punch.
No more time to play around,Merk you with lines no witness
Fuckin clown,He never comes 'heavy',all his punches 'weightless'
Not that original, but ok punch.
Pull out this win,And might aswell call this cat the "system"
Conflicts a "sin",So your verses no one wants to read them
Ok attempt at wordplay, but not that witty. Punch was blah.
This battle im takin with ease,this ya can see,just look:him vs me
The boy pussy,when ya put the.............
............................"Boy N Da Hood" like "Jody Breeze"
Bad closer. Ok punch

Overall, your similies are kinda weak and your wordplay isn't that witty. Work on your personals and your wordplay.

My vote goes to Cezar for punches and personals.

v- Cezar
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