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Old 07-15-05, 03:22 PM   #57
Texxus
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Voted For: efecx

vote-Efecx

E:
your verse was aight coulda used some work....punches were aight and personals was ok...structure was ok...it flowd wel all together..and your opener was aight and closer was not bad...vocabular was nicely used in this drop....keep it up...good drop

Cas:
your verse was good aswell....structure good and it had nice flow....punches were aight not as hard...and personals were ok kinda lackin.....opener was good but closer was kinda dope....vocabulary was kinda bad though...everything has to be original....bbut good drop tho

this was close but since efecx had better punches and use of vocab...ima give this to him...no hate or disrespect...

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