CHRYMESINDICATE
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Voted For: ChImNeY
mmmmmmmmm...... interesting battle........
ima have to go with chimney for the win.... unfuckwidable....... you need to sort out your verse structure.... it's all over the place.... dont put the dashes (-) were your rhyming words are it just gets in the way.... looked messy.... chimney...... that binocular line was pretty good........ pretty good multies...
Your Fuckin wack-n'-you-know-it, Weakling, step in da Ring I'll swing yo Ass-to-da-Ropes punchin till you collaps-to-the-Flo' then watch you garggle Bloody Balls after I punt-cha Nutts to tha Back-ov-ya-Throat
^^^ that section was pretty cool.... good multies... id say you'd be pretty good with audio...
Return the favour and drop a vote on my battles aight...
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