wow... hahahahah... at least he admits it...
anyways...
Ffrosts suprised ur downfall make ur coffin rise as the nails convect
Slam ya intestines so we see artik 'wind blows' yet cant 'hail' respect
Aint far-to-kill cus my fist divides ya organism numerate ya particle
Dont need to write a statement about wack but still giving artik-L/article
So u departing ill? in the jaws of a clock this time it crunches
Bitch ill leave u 'dis-missed' like im joking about ur punches<<< LMAO!!!!
vs.
nothing...
Artik- tip, elevate just a [i]tad[/b] bit... some of ur lines are like "yeah, its wordplay, but it doesnt really connect at all..." you cant call it wordplay just because two words have the same concept...u cant be like "i'll "smack ur grin".................................................. .........................
....................................so you can say my punches "broke ur teeth"!!!"
its not really that good... that sweet success line could have been a lot better if tha window of opportunity part wasnt so stretched...