Voted For: lyrical mage

lm. eh an alright battle but i really think you could have done alot more with it. the only thing i was really feeling was your closer. but otherwise you need to up your vocab and work on your structure alot more. the wordplay was alright.. there were not that many metas. i think one the o-town line. but besides that an alright verse. just work on your stuff a little more and elevate..
c-hood- this was all over the place. and you have alot of work to do . umm first off if you need to explain it.. don't use it, the rhyme scheme was very forced so the flow wasnt as on target as LM's overall though you have alot of work ahead of you also next time run a spell check. it dosent help the cause when you mispell a few words. ok verse but needs alot of work

for having the better verse-LM

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