Thread: (X)eed vs 4fil
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Old 07-16-05, 02:02 AM   #32
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Voted For: 4fil

eh an alright verse except for the fact that you used the word "wackness" about 5 times ha. but you did play off his name alot but but it just seemed you lacked after the 2nd bar. like you didn't know what to say or something next time i suggest you take a little more time with things and check your spelling. also come harder :he 4fils destiny to its extreme source of practise
"practise makes perfect" but he perfects his own wackness

stuff like that dosent win battles. werd a nice battle though just work on it a little bit

4fil... lol your verse was sorta like a show.. with all the colors and all the text and all the links... next time don't do that it just brings down the quality of the verse.. o yea if you have to explain it..DON'T USE IT. but yea anyway umm i liked the verse still alot of weak things in it. but otherwise not to shabby. learn how to spell.. because mispelled words just bring down the quality of the battle.

Vote-4Fil cuz he had a overall better verse
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