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Old 07-16-05, 06:25 AM   #15
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Voted For: efecx

this wasn't a completely one sided battle but i thought i leant more in efecx's favour to be honest. i thought the punches were ok, nothing special but worth a metion nevertheless.
Lemme break this shit down real quick:

Kid~ca$:

who tha fukk r u kidin,your only RUNNING your mouth.....
a worse pile of bullshit.. than yer leader"runin tha south.

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i get exactly what you're tryna put across but a weak punch all the same

ull never be R.A.W...only ever Rapin.Against.Wack herbz
with dictionary in hand...u still couldnt beat me wit wordz


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No that punch is far too elementary

i see failure to comprehend...how your not gone yet......
u vaccinatin animalz is yer only chance to become a vet...


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And again too weak a punch to be effective

fuk yo undeafeted army..im rainin lead on ya whole city..
if yer armys bad as yer BATTLES...ill give them my pity....


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Ok set up line but shit punchline

im out..when this kid checkz..ive droped and been gone..
imatate yer avy...hit tha trash were garbage belongz....


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ok but nothin too special

Efecx's verse had better harder hitting punches and even though he constantly dwelled on the crip thing and that got a lil borin after a while his personals were structured in a harder hittin way.
The best line in this battle was from efecx:

Listenin to livin legendz ryhmes is kinda depressin makes me wanna give suicide lessons
But fuck look all the readers of livin legendz Open Mic diss to RAW already started guessin

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the second line was a lil disappointing but the first line more than makes up for what was lacking in the second.

No hate but i think efecx had this battle


YO RTF on my battle:

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=200188

~peace~