Voted For: flow verse

Ok this was a decent battle but i thought flow verse had a superior verse:

"Export," you got that right cause i'm about to "ship" you out of RV/
Cat even if you "elevated" your game and got "UPS" u still couldn't "deliver" a line that would impress me/

lol i thought that line was nice even though the punchline felt a lil bit too stretched. 6/10

cat u cat rap so give up on the mic/
dog the "punches" are just like those at college parties "spiked"/

this wasn't very good to be honest i thought the set up
was weak and the punchline was poor 3/10

and even if you rhymes attracted "AIDS" they still wouldn't be "sick"/
and this battle is over cause like "paper mache" you've just been "ripped"/

ok this was an ok closer but nothing special to be completely honest with you. 5/10

overall 14/30 = 47%

Export:

I'm Quick to Slap This Newb That Simply has no clue
Like a Tattoo, This Loss is always gonna be stuck on you

this was a weak opener. you shoulda come with a harder punch. 3/10

The Words that i Spit have Shredded-Yah-Credit
Iam a Soilder, yah A Pussy NewsCaster Embedded

hmm nah too much self glorification.no distinguishable punch. 1/10

Yah Rhyems ant Hot, they Colder then Jack Frost
Only Blood yah spilled was a aids case at Red Cross

weak. 1/10

This Ant Know Battle, Torture of No Prevention
Pay attention, I dont follow the Geneva-Convention

nah this was wack, just a statement, no punch 0/10

overall 5/40 = 12.5%

export you need to elevate and stop using self glorification and statements. learn to develop your punches.

flow verse you also need to develop your punches more so that you can come harder with your verse.

Anyway flow verse gets this one