hopesfall.......a little short, quick and simple but an ok piece i guess, a hard topic to do but it was approached well and you managed to pull off a little sumthin, vocab wise i dont think you was all up there, there was some imagery and you had that hidden little bit between the lines so nice shit with that....

tweety......dope piece, a good approach to the topic and a nice delivery with which you stayed on point all the way through, you had a lot of imagery in your verse which is always good, i liked the emotion in it, as always the vocab was dope, not 100% consistent with the usual complexity you demonstrate but still a really good read....

V/ - Tweety

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