if by complex you mean forced....then yes.

you really need to improve your wording and flow....you dont have to rhyme twice on a line, because alot of the time, if comes off as cheesey and forced. no offense, you have nice concepts, you just need some tuning to make it more effective

dizzee, i enjoyed your verse man, closer was funny, nice concepts, and you made them work.....well done

v/dizzee

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