E.C.- Alright Ok verse here. You Had Imagery in your verse, not weak not that great but average. I didnt feel no emotion in your verse, and plus the approach you put down was ok still could've took a different approach. The vocab wasn't there either, words too basic. No metaphors in your verse, for expanding the imagery. But Ok verse, just too basic.

Mimises-Errrr I liked your good verse, it had imagery in it explaining detail with emotion. Yeah I liked your emotion. I say upp on the vocab though. This was short but it had alot of stuff in it. The best aspect in your piece was Imagery keep that up.

Overall= I'm sorry but i vote for Mim, he had emotion and imagery down, short but deep. E.C. I liked your verse, but it was too basic, the imagery was ok, but mim beat you with emotion he added into his piece. I vote Mim.

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