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Voted For: ~Conflict~
flow verse
Conflict 's battling me to get some "tips"
Cause if he had "cents" he wouldn't come with such weak shit
No wordplay and a fake personal.
Let's be serious u just can't rap
Only time your lines will ever be "right" is if u used the"tab"
Neither can you, bad punch.
Named yourself "conflict" before u met me
Change it to "veggie' now cause u don't like the taste of this "beef"
Self glorification and bad attempt at wordplay on his name.
Even if @ the begining of ur verse you typed "H2O"
You still couldn’t "bond" ur lines together to "flow"
Not a very creative punch. Bad one anyway.
You need to work on making more original punches and personals. Also, try not to include fake personals. Try re wording your punches as well.
Conflict
im from bk where da big bois flock/
well come to ya hood, kill ya and clean it up with "red soxs"/ *
Self glorification and a I will line. Bad attempt at wordplay. Filler too.
ill tear ya ta shreads wit my lyrical merks/
dis nigga garbage ima show'em how his own "flow verse" works
I will line again and bad wordplay punch.
im a bit wild, you accepted i smiled/
ask ur mother and figure out why they call u a "problem" child**
Not that original. Bad punch anyway.
Unnoriginal punches and bad wordplay. Personals aren't that great either.
My vote goes to Conflict for better punches. His wordplay was a little wittier, but both have a lot of room to improve.
v- Conflict
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