Voted For: Stanza


You know how they say that you should... "learn from your mistakes"
But when u hear Stanza’s rhyming we’ll all have a bad case of an ear-ache
^^c'mon...wat kinda concept is this?His music so bad ya ears hurt??C'mon.
Cuz he fake, and when he types his verse they already been a recognition
His rhymes and lines repeat over and over just look for Stanza’s definition
^^TOo basic....just cause his definition means sumtin...doesn't mean you can just state it
So after u get ripped like old comics... ull be crying when u lose so heres ur tissue
And the hilarity u hearin is that they laughing at u trust me they aint laughing wit u
^^^Played out......

C'mon you need to work on your concepts.2 of your punches were played out.That 2nd bar doesn't make sence.Stanzas has same rhyme shceme,rhythm and shit.But not the same words.So that bar made no sence.That 3rd bar.....they not laughing with you....they laughing at you?.....that shit was used in a Disney movie I saw long time ago.Weak verse.

This Dude Is "Incorrectly Dissing" Me Like "Typo's When He Curse"
Ayo He "Predistined To Lose" Because He Used a *Recylcyed Verse*
^^^nah.....not that hot
Im Checkin In & Dropping & This Dude Aint Even Viewed The Thread
You "Eating Pencils" So Its No Use of Me To Try To "Fill You With Lead"
^^Pencil/Lead lines are played out
3 Wins & 8 Loses?....Damn I Shouldnt Say No More Yo Rec Speaks Itself
I Must Be a "Janitor" The Way I Left The "Pen N' Paper" On The "Shelf"
^^Meh....played......but the best line in this battle

Well...ur verse was weak too.Had played concepts like janitor/shelf and pencil/lead.That first bar was the most creative bar in this...but it didn't hit him one bit.You should put some frsh wordplay and shit.Take out the (") and (*) in every bar.We not that stupuid that we need hints to decode a bar.Esspecially when it wasn't that complex.

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