listening as i type:

intro is cool....kinda epic and shit..."auttooomatik"....nice juggular play..thief line -_-.....this beat s head noddin 4sho...shit is near rippin ma speakers yo...your shit defo sound better when not all over-dubbed...sum wierd adlib goin on tho cuz whixh disguises a cool accordian line...u got space fo anuva line b4 hook blud or even a midtone folowing or echo so u aint got that lil period of nuttin den da hook...chorus is cool...fasssssssssstttt forward to third verse-damn there is no third verse...nice spit man -7.5/10 keep em comin

P.S ima rip dis beat n u let u c if u like it...peace

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