yea I kno this beat this is Nas Shoot em up...I mean yall gotta straight flow, I think you couldve came harder, and shit with the lyrics. I dont think you came powerful enough, but it was straight. But yall did need more emotion. The hook is coo too, but still the song is a lil plain. The second person verse needed work, he was wack to me. the first nigga rappin sound like Bun B, but its straight.
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