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alright ive voting for u because u went outside of the box u wrote about truth black was just blah nothing really special i think u took an extra step
ur emotion was good vocab could be improved ur imagery was great
black ur vocab was great but i didnt that picture in my mind like i did when i read ^'s u did good though id say try and go outside the box some more both good peices though no doubt

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