rtf... beat def cool... some arabic shyt.. u come in nyce, maybe turn ya vocals up.. you got a good voice no doubt nyce presence.. danm some good words n vocab... im lovin this beat man, should send it to me... AIM: fo twenty

samples on the hook are sexy, the production is amazing on this joint, now again u come in, dunno if its cuz ur vocals are low but emotion is just a tiiiiiiny bit lackin to me... lol ive used a tetris line like that b4.. bring ya block down like tetris <that was mine... if i laced it i woulda at least said sumn over the hook, like "yea, million eyes baby!" lol... damn 3rd verse i like the best cuz u really killin tha multis with complex lyrics im feelin that.. yea all in all this was nyce, seems like with more experience u can become quite good..

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