Voted For: Wes City

West city wants to test !impact!..thats a No/
Im a new boy but i heat up mics when i flow/
EHH
Spit chit for real,hit to kill/
It'll gets messy when i grip my steel/
EHH...GUNPLAY
I can see but lookin at yah chain its white/
So feel free to tuck it in at night/
WHAT DA HELL
Coz i might eat you i can make a meal of ice/
And if i eat yah it's enough to feed me twice/
NAW
It wont be nice to see to see me nice/
Coz when you see me they'll be atleast a knife/
EHH
Fuck by standers im leavin them gob smaked/
With there mouth so wide open there gobs crack/
NAW


BREAKDOWN-YOU CAN SEE THAT YOU ARE A NEWBIE AT BATTLIN..VERSE WASN'T BAD BUT YOU GOTTA GET RIGHT WIT THE FLOW...AND YOU ALSO HAVE TO PUT IN A LIL MORE PERSONALS AND PUNCHES...WITHOUT THOSE IT ISN'T REALLY A BATTLE....AND YOU ALSO NEED TO UP YOUR VOCAB AND COMPLEXITY LEVEL...




You wont be famous ya style aint sound
The only thing makin an impact is ya face on the ground
OK PLAY ON HIS NAME...
You’re a faggot im surprised you even have a dick
Impact!! ducks more than kid hockey flicks
HAHA NICE
I don’t smoke weed but the L you will taste
Watchin the breast stroke is your idea of 2nd base
HAHA
What are you in 3rd grade time for show and tell
As a optamistic demon ya don't have a hope in hell
NICE
You aint from India but ill put red dots on ya head
shit…this a roll over dog, so sit still an play dead
EHH...SLIPPIN
Makin an impact on an internet rap site ya wack kid
you winning?
Its outta the question an you aint got the balls to ask it
EHH


BREAKDOWN-VERSE STARTED OFF REAL NICE...HAD A COUPLE PUNCHES THROWN AND LANDED RIGHT ON HIS CHIN....HAD THAT ONE PERSONAL PLAY ON HIS NAME...NICE BATTLE VERSE BUT YOU KIND OF FELL OFF AT THE END OF YOUR VERSE....BUT THIS WAS KINDA OF ONE SIDED

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Who made my Sig- Shief BITCH!