I peeped this before I think you reposted this on her

Blaze - he kept it street..flow is good...lyrics are aiight...presence is good...delivery is good

Klepto - Same ass Blaze..but your shit is way nicer.... and the punches are good....

L.Veracity - Everything you did was nice but I did notice on flaw you got..you show no emotion and you never change how you flow somtimes ma..

Lines that made me mad
Hittin aint happen
No kissin and feeling
Pass these niggas around like a note up in class
I make them beleive they are getting some ass
I keep a mean ass walk
I don't want a man cause Im all about the chase or whatever

^ Them shits had me like damn...stick to my girl sike but umm....raise your vocal levels too i could barely here some of your lyrics