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Originally Posted by Artik Phrost
^ i rhyme twice on a line...becuz thats HOW I DO IT sometimes....thats how i want to do it....i cud very very split each line into two lines....would that make the wordin easier?....im not shortening my lines...or spittin different...imma be me....
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i didn't say shorten them......i said your shit is forced, and fuckin stupid to read because your rhyme scheme is basic and forced
you wanna elevate? then change your fuckin structure up, cause you have a shitty way of doing things; you have good concepts, but you're ruining your shit with forced multies and horrible wording
FORCED