Voted For: Thassarap

I'll have you lookin from under your cap like a bottle of sprite
digest my words cause it's the only way you swallow delight
OK
i'm hear to teach you, so for today i'll use the board and chalk you up nice
only reason you'd make a tight cut, is if i brought a the knife
OK
i'll twist these mic wires to a dna helix and show what you made of
you takin' rhymes, so how you gon' beat me with shit you didn't make up
HAHA...OK
cause i spit simplistic art, took away the beat when i ripped his heart
whent a capella and inflcited sparks so he'd light up when he's stripped apart
HAHA
cause i'll only way you'd rip the sheets is if you shred the paper
since thasarap! it's over, you rubbin blood staines on rhymes...like a red easer
OK


BREAKDOWN-YOUR VERSE WASN'T BAD AT ALL...IT JUST LACKED HARD HITTIN PUNCHES AND PERSONALS...YOU MAYBE COULD HAVE TRIED TO PLAY ON HIS NAME A LIL BIT TO..BUT THAT IS ALL YOU NEED TO INCORPORATE INTO YOUR RHYME IS PUNCHES AND PERSONALS




I don't care what you say, punk, you're nothin but talk
Yea you're soft, that's why you're named after ya cock*
HAHA..OK
And if you think you can fuck with me, don't even try it
Cause your hair ain't red, but my punches can dye it
UM..OK
But if you got that itch, and you need-to-see-a-fight
I gon knock back "bitch", it ain't gon "bia-bia"-right**
OK
You can't win or "t.i." me, so just "be easy", man***
When you rap, you "freeze" up like "Young Jeezy", man
NICE****
And if rap skills were money, you'd have only made a quarter
You even practive falling off, that's why you're a skateboarder
HAHA...


BREAKDOWN-NICE VERSE...I DON'T THINK THAT YOU NEEDED TO EXPLAIN ANY OF YOUR LINES CUZ I GOT EM WITOUR THE EXPLANATIONS..AND WHAT WON IT FOR YOU WERE YOUR PUNCHES AND PLAY ON HIS NAME...GOOD VERSE


GOOD BATTLE...1

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