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Old 07-17-05, 03:02 PM   #6
Dabatos
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listening.. really luvin the beat..

the flow is pretty good.. lyrics are good man.. hmm should sorta up ur vocal volume up a lil jst a lil.. or i may be wrong.. iono im filipino lol.. delivery is okay..

chorus: chorus is nice... but sorta sounds like its jst part of the verse u know?? but pretty good..

verse: yeah same as other verse..

Chorus: nice once again..

7/10..

overall: not your best. i've heard alot better from you btu this is still higher than average.. g'd job lol
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