listening as i type:

beat is nice..singin is cool..

Dabatos --> i aint feelin your delivery man, sounds like ur straining to rap, ur voice is unnatural soundin i unno feelin ur delivery, ur adlibs after the word is cool when used a couple of times not ova n ova n remove the "chea" adlibs they dnt fit...lyrics r decent u basically stick to the content and cover it well, ur flow is on beat n clarity n quality are str8...id say basicaly jus spit - i think ur spittin like that tryin 2 show emotion, let the emotion come thru naturally homie and ull b str8 4sho keep em comin

RTF:http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=197837

Tha Q--> dam u droppi lik everyday u come in nice...quality is str8...like the first bars wordplay...u rippin this beat 4 sho, ur flow is tight on tha beat...nice multis...couple of times were its obvious where you runnin out breath..otha than that solid verse on this....wanna collab sumtime? pm me if u do..

decent track yall

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