Voted For: C-Hood

C-Hood
Ok first of all.... don't seperate your bars, it ruins the flow. Second watch out for the self-glory. 3rd some of your bars were streatched.... those are the things to watch out for in the future. Ok your opener was pretty good, nice personal. Your closer was kinda stretched. Your other bars were pretty good, hard hitting and creative. Good personals in your verse too

lyrical mage
ok... same thing with you, don't seperate your bars, it ruins the flow to your verse. Now your opener was lackin a little bit and your closer was kinda self-glory, but funny as hell with that Andy Milinokis (i thought i was the only one who watched that show). Your other bars where alright but some were to short to make it a nice hard punch... work on tweakin your lines to make them harder hitting

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