not bad
im glad to see you did the border right by erasing the top of it where fab comes out, but keeping the bottom so its still there...good work on that, most people blow that part..

but the biggest issue is where fabs cut off on the side..
when you work with an overhang, you gotta remember your not just working inside the sig box anymore
so everything that comes out of the box, shouldnt be cut off, because its an open area thatll be transparent, so if it were cut off it wont make any sense...
see where im going?

with that said, the text aint bad...i just find the white stroke a bit questionable...
so not bad for a first overhang, but like i said theres still a few minor mistakes you should fix in your next few..

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