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Old 07-17-05, 05:46 PM   #13
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Voted For: Stanza

You know how they say that you should... "learn from your mistakes"
But when u hear Stanza’s rhyming we’ll all have a bad case of an ear-ache

MEH, OK CONCEPT BUT PUNCH TOO BASIC.

Cuz he fake, and when he types his verse they already been a recognition
His rhymes and lines repeat over and over just look for Stanza’s definition

NICE PERSONAL, I LIKED IT.

So after u get ripped like old comics... ull be crying when u lose so heres ur tissue
And the hilarity u hearin is that they laughing at u trust me they aint laughing wit u

AGAIN A GOOD CONCEPT BUT KINDA BASIC.

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This Dude Is "Incorrectly Dissing" Me Like "Typo's When He Curse"
Ayo He "Predistined To Lose" Because He Used a *Recylcyed Verse*

GOOD SET UP, PUNCH WAS OK BUT NOT AS GOOD.

Im Checkin In & Dropping & This Dude Aint Even Viewed The Thread
You "Eating Pencils" So Its No Use of Me To Try To "Fill You With Lead"

KINDA PLAYED BUT GOOD PERSONAL / PUNCH.

3 Wins & 8 Loses?....Damn I Shouldnt Say No More Yo Rec Speaks Itself
I Must Be a "Janitor" The Way I Left The "Pen N' Paper" On The "Shelf"

NICE NAMEPLAY GOOD PUNCH

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OVERALL THIS WAS KINDA CLOSE, BUT STANZA GETS THIS FOR BEING LESS BASIC AND MORE COMPLEX.

ALSO STANXA HAD BETTER PERSONALS IMO.

NO HATE BUT HE DEFINATELY GOT THIS.
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