hmm well it sounds like your gay the way you talk about this guy, but why switch it from a guy to a gurl i dont get it but the story was interesting and shit the imagery was very good. just a kinda twisted story but i liked it. the vocab coulda been upped but your such a good story teller you got me to read it. the emotion was very well in use good job with that and overall i was feelin this just up the vocab a little more. 1

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