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Originally Posted by dassaster
Voted For: Stanza
You know how they say that you should... "learn from your mistakes"
But when u hear Stanza’s rhyming we’ll all have a bad case of an ear-ache
^^Wat the hell is it...this puchline is bullshit
Cuz he fake, and when he types his verse they already been a recognition
His rhymes and lines repeat over and over just look for Stanza’s definition
^^^OK......not spectacular...but good compared to the one before
So after u get ripped like old comics... ull be crying when u lose so heres ur tissue
And the hilarity u hearin is that they laughing at u trust me they aint laughing wit u
^^^WAT the fuck.....just shut the fuck up!!...
Ur verse was bullshit.Terrible wording and even worst concepts.Ear-ache.That bullshit.
This Dude Is "Incorrectly Dissing" Me Like "Typo's When He Curse"
Ayo He "Predistined To Lose" Because He Used a *Recylcyed Verse*
^^OK.............
Im Checkin In & Dropping & This Dude Aint Even Viewed The Thread
You "Eating Pencils" So Its No Use of Me To Try To "Fill You With Lead
^^^played out....wat the fuck!!!"
3 Wins & 8 Loses?....Damn I Shouldnt Say No More Yo Rec Speaks Itself
I Must Be a "Janitor" The Way I Left The "Pen N' Paper" On The "Shelf"
^^agin......played out..wat the fuck!!!
U had some bullshit lines too.But your problem was not str8 bullshit...but more of being played out.But this was a fuckin weak battle
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Let me do this correctly-
Pen&Paper-Work on your fuckin concepts.That "laughing at you,laught with" shit line was used by little kids in pre-school.And you think you can you use it as a diss?Wrong.Make something that gives us that "OOh factor".Nothing was wrong with ur strture and flow.But your rhyme sheme was whack and newbish.That only decent line was Stanza one....but that wasn't executed correctly.May have been sumtin if it was...............
Stanza-Ur concepts,unlike Pen &Paper,were played as opposed to just weak and embarrsing to urself like pen &Paper.Like him though,you had a good structure/flow....but a simple rhyme sheme.First bar was OK...the best in the battle.That lead line and janitor/shelf has been played out to death.Even newbs use those concepts.
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