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Old 07-18-05, 11:53 AM   #5
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Originally Posted by Macca
yay. thanx.. now I want more.




^^^Lol!^^^^



It was aiight,sorta gets corny at times...
But it was nice how you played out tha darker side of romance!

i like this line"Falling in love losing you is like losing your life
I seen my wife leave slowly now you left me so lonely

are you talkin bout your future wife walkin out tha door or just ur wife 4real.
either way I like that...

I give you 8.3/10...because I would like ta here how tha notes where dropped!

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