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Old 07-18-05, 03:14 PM   #25
N.Tavarez
the medicine man
 
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dis kid's fake i got tons of proof,he really aint got guns 2 shoot.
he's a nobody..even "small kids in iraq" dont "look up 2 troop".
NICE OPENER, GOOD PLAY ON NAME , SET UP BLAH THOUGH 7/10
whut record label in they rite mind would wanna pursue ya???.
u'll neva rap offline u like "web cam's" u stay "on da computer".
NICER FOLLOW UP, GOOD PUNCH FUNNY SHIT 8/10
u got no flow ya bars r so so dis homo think's his style's good.
only "album we'll see w/ ya pic in it" has "photo's of ya child hood".
EHHH ITS A GOOD PUNCH JUST DIDNT HIT HARD 6/10
while im rippin a sick beat,luva boy troop lickin his chick feet.
not caliph,but ya girl slept with da "whole cali" 4 u da get in da 6 feet.
ANOTHER JUST SO SO BAR, NICE MULTIS 6/10
cant believe u still a vet..not familiar yet? well marvjay i be da villian.
you no 'gangsta' son ya whole style's "WaCK(ed)" like "mafia killings".
I LIKED THIS BAR, PROBABLY USED B4 BUT GOOD 8/10
u aint gota "put ya CON's in my mouth 4 me da "eat ya VERSE'S".
beat troop 2 da ground he'll be like "gza's cd"..."beneath da surface".
NAH DOG WEAK CLOSER, LACKED PUNCH 5/10
TOTAL 40
Its Obvious Jay's a Dinga Ling Fiend..... Yellin out Queens
Performing and Juggling Balls..... Closest Marv got 2 Kings
PRETTY GENERIC OPENER HERE 6/10
Ea is Jay's Only Play......Jus Fuck it ya Harmless Marvlous
Sever ya Limbs to See if you can Hold ya Weight Armless
NICE PUNCH HERE, REALLY THE SET UP IS GOOD 9/10
Stop Takein Napz wit Female Pups talkin Like u got Layed
Actually the year "1009" Dashes in your Drops got Played
DECENT RHYME, WASNT WORDED THE BEST THOUGH 6/10
I Heard u was Coo wit Q?. 2 u Hes Probly Flippin Hot Man
Marv Fell off & Couldnt Rebound if he was Dennis Rodman
LMAO GOOD SHIT HERE 8/10
Are u in a Hurry 2 Get Off.Mus be cuz i can Tel.Ya.Pacein
Bunny Hoppin on Bmx's Is How Jay Bounces Wit Elevation
ANOTHER DECENT ONE THAT LACKED IN HIT POWER 6/10
Yet ima Leave ya 2 Sorrow.... So im Certainly Hurtin Last
And this "Fams" Missing in Action Like the Old Urkels Cast
DECENT CLOSER HERE TO END IT 7/10
TOTAL 42

BOTH VERSES WERENT UP TO PAR WITH YOU GUYS SKILL, AND IT COULDNT WENT EITHER WAY, IN MY OPINION TROOP TOOK IT