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Old 07-18-05, 03:17 PM   #6
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Voted For: Wes City

Fuck a kordozar his ass will just choke
And tha fat lady has sung…his mom jus hit a high note
8/10 nice opener
Yea Im an ill head with a mind that knows ya wack see
The only thing that bumps kordozar is a face full of acne
8/10 nice punch
Your not dope, you prolly look like cali’s sister
Ill beat ya hands down on the spot like I was playin twister
8/10 again nice
I mean this battle is nonsense like your iq you bum
……this line would be dope if your name wasn’t so fuckin dumb
7/10 good
ya punches don’t hold weight and are very controversial
kors-light.. I can tell with all them low carb commercials
7/10 good
a bottle of sleepin pills and a lullabye for this geek
you may need those^^
…… but I jus read ya shit and that puts me to sleep
8/10 good closer

Overall: 46/60

You Nice?Ock Please Your A Nobody Anywhere See Boy Listen
And It's Easy To Knock Wes Off Without The Detroit Pistons
7/10 ok openor
Ya Seed Will Lose Both Legs Before It Ever Starts Steppin
Come On Fam Your A Has Been So How You Learnin New Methods?
9/10 good punch and personals
You Respected?Highly Doubt It Even Ya Legs Can't Stand You
Ko The Only 5-0 You Seen Was Ya Grandfathers Birthday Candle
8/10 nice
I Bet Ya Audio Was The Flip After All The Tracks Then Flopped
Kord Always Was A 'Star'Who Left Him Gassed Up Like Astronauts
8/10 good punch
Defeatin Me With What?You'll Lose Just By The Personals In Ya Name
Cartoon!!Nut They'll Indentify Pinky Once They See It In His Brain
7/10 ok
Ya Verse Was The PastWack Punches..Why Post It You Already Knew It
Already Left You Blue!Now My Black Fist Will Match With The Bruises
5/10 weak closer

Overall: 44/60

v/ wes

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