Voted For: .Barz Of Steel.
A'ight...this was actually a pretty close battle...
Bars...nice verse...great use of metaphors...nice personals and punches...nice flow...nice structure...I would avoid using "quotations" though...it just makes it harder to read...overall good drop...
Verbal Shooter...another nice verse...good punches and everything...decent personals too...
Overall a close battle, but I'm gonna have to give it to Barz...close to call though...
Return the favor...
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