ok....listening....

like the intro to the beat...

beat is dope....

still gotta work on your flow...even though its gettin a lil bit better with every song you do.....some of the lyrics are coo...some i wasnt feelin...like the benchin line.....

you mos def gotta work on mixing and getting the quality better....i cant tell if you have a hook...it all sounds like one big verse to be honest....which it may be....ok now i hear the hook...put some effects on the hook....to make it stand out some...


just keep workin man

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