Ok you open wit the hook......hook is kool but coulda been stronger....but it was catchy in its own right....ok first verse is real basic....delivery is good not spectacular but you got general idea of how to ride the beat....the flow was koo but rhyme scheme was terrible....way too basic an lacked any real chnage ups...2nd verse....came in same as u did in first verse which is bad you lacking any change up its makin song somewhat boring...again delivery was koo an flow was koo but scheme was wack....ok 3rd verse....you changed up delivery a lil which was koo u didn't really need drastic change ups jus subtle ones so the 3rd verse was pleasant surprise....but the flow seems rushed here...however story was delevoped good...nice ending...the beat an quality was nice it really carried this track over the top...all in all it wasn't a bad song at all def a good listen.....I give it a 7.5/10

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