Voted For: Young Dollar

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=198924
RTF HERE Y.D OR VOTE WILL BE REMOVED ^

Xceed you my dog, but Y.D Got you beat, sorry man

X:
Not a bad verse, you tried goin all out an use more lines than your oppenent, but some of the bars seemed a lil forced because of that...

punches was aight, that babe pig in the city shit was kinda corny tho.....wordplay could use a litle elevation, an up the vocab....but still, it was a nice verse, you was unlucky to lose

Y.D:
Decent drop....one of your better verses man, your elevating alot, thats always good.....lol

But yeah, punches hit alot harder, they seemed more complex, an the wordplay wasnt that good, but it was better...try addin a few multies in the bars too improve your flow....an you'll be good to go man!

RTF Or vote will be removed, link is at the top of my post

Peace out good job y'all

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