Voted For: DoContinue

battle doesn't deserve a vote because it is one sided but i am a nice guy...




yo momma done smoked grass
when She shit out yo sorry ass
no
Your a nigga from the streets
and your momma has big teats
hell naw
you like to masterbate to scat
and Jiz on your mutha fuckin cat
WTF?
I give it to your girlfriend every night
and i have her screamin Dy-no-mite
wow
Your granny done get it up the ass from your dad
And your momma gets fuckin mad
are you serious?
So she gets wasted and gets fucked up
So then you get thrown up
i guess you are serious!
This battles in the bag
cause your momma is an old hag
wow i heard mama jokes work well in battles...


BREAKDOWN-SON YOU VERSE WAS EXTREMLY ELEMENTARY...THAT IS OK BEING THAT YOU ARE A NEWBIE...BUT YOU NEED TO ELEVATE A LOT...UP ON YOUR VOCAB...ELEVATE ON YOUR PUNCHES AND PERSONALS..IT IS SO EASY TO PLAY ON HIS NAME AND YOU DIDN'T EVEB TRY...IT SEEMS LIKE YOU WERE JUST TRYIN TO RHYME...






I'm a man for beating the crap outta panzi deacons
and i'll only key multis cuz this fag got banned for cheating
HAHA...O REALLY?
yo ass is mine to pop, why you rap? who would sign this doc?
he's so dumb he didnt even post how many lines to drop
HAHA...OK
this bitch aint allowed to compete so they gon close this battle up
so i'll fuck this faggot up, just to get my status up
HAHA...THATS FUCKED UP
he got my mom but i got lead thangs, to pop tha shoddy from far
he like :headbanging: so i'll kill him and rock tha body outta tha car
OK
im takin ya bread like I stole lunches, and wins from you keep piling
he try to throw punches, but only gettin a hit from them e-smileys
OK


BREAKDOWN-VERSE WASN'T NO WHERE NEAR PERFECT....BUT IT WAS ENUFF TO BEAT THIS GUY...HAD A COUPLE NICE PERSONALS IN THERE...BUT YOUR PUNCHES NEED TO COME A LIL HARDER...YOU WON THIS BATTLE BECAUSE OF EVERY CATEGORY!

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Who made my Sig- Shief BITCH!