listening...

1st...comes in real nice...with a good ass delivery...and good flow...
lyrically u killin it man...good shit

2nd dude...comes in nice...delivery is nice....lyrically...u usin some nice vocab....im feelin this verse...nice....good work....

LOL @ the hook...i like it....originality here....i like the lil skits...

3rd dude...sometimes the volume on your vocals goes down a lil...which takes away from the verse....vocab is nice...delivery is good....flow is decent....just fix that volume shit and youll be straight...

make it fade out at the end or something...the way it just cuts off...kinda sucks lol...

but anyways....good shit...overall good track right here...equal performances by everyone..nobody really outshined anyone...good song...

PLEASE RTF with feedback on my new song "The Perfect Woman"...thanks

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=200738

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