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Old 07-19-05, 04:18 PM   #10
Spoken Word
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From: NY State Of Mind
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Voted For: un-fuck-widable

Transkriptz:

un fuck wid fuckin with me not gonna happen
you are the one with brains i be bashin
^^no 2/10
I burst in to flames so that means im hotter
cause im a sold out nigga like harry potter
^^wtf 1/10
I be makin you take more drugs so u can over dose
you think you a vet just cause u over 100 posts
^^ehh 3/10
killin you verbally with word play ya lifes in danger
you like eminem that means you need to manage your anger
^^decent meta ok punch 6/10
dammit how many times do i really have to notice
im way ahead you keep in mind that im still the dopest
^^self glorification 2/10
you with your lyrics nigga you aint a vet
you just a faggot with a dumbass accent
^^no 0/10
i got my, ak47 buretta plus my mac
let me lay down the law you cant spit and thats a fact
^^no 2/10
im layin you in the dead like i got graveyard shift
im faster than you so you can live up to the name "swift"
^^no but decent personal 3/10

Overall: 19/80 (24%)


Un-Fuck-Widable:

Open file: prewriten spit.... replace opponent with my name/
Took you weeks to type that shit, this is a momentary flame//
^^ehh 2/10
But I doubt you always bit, though your style is bitten frequently/
Your Punches Never Hit, how can those lines ever be for me?//
^^ehh 2/10
dis is sick-shit , but not a Quick-Spit, this Misfit who Licks Dick Bit-This/
But got it twisted, his loss will be moving like Tectonic Plates Shifted//
^^dope multies good punch 7/10
Killin' you with Tight Types, you cant See Me like you blinded by a Bright Light/
But im Quite Nice like Iron Mic on Fight-Night, like 'Tyson' Den Might Bite//
^^multies are getting overused 5/10
Nice lines? You Lack Samples, Mine will leave your Back Mangled
Played punches... and your verses have More Proof than Jacc Daniels//
^^nice bar 6/10
I slay the Hardest, Spray my Targets, everything you Portray is Garbage/
Play ya part kid, only time you have a Big Pun is listenin to ya Favorite Artist//
^^seems familiar to me 6/10
When im flippin the words'll be, makin ya Wet The Scene Up, cause you fuckin Drippin Nervously//
Thinkin ya spits is Hurtin Me, im rippin this Nerd With Ease, Den's weaker than Bitches In Surgery//
^^stretched 4/10
Nobodys PEEPING-HIS-SHIT, They Just SLEEP-ON-THIS-BITCH/
Your Raps Truly Awful And They KEEPING-A-GLITCH//
^^ehh 4/10
& Dont FEED-OFF-MY-VERSE Or You'll Be NEEDING-A-HEARSE/
One Of My Lines Is Better Than anything u spit cause Your LEADING-DISPERSE//
^^good closer 6/10

Overall: 42/90 (47%)


Vote: Un-Fuck-Widable


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