Listening as I type

beat is pretty cool.....laid back. I think your vocals could be raised a little on the chorus in the beginning......maybe your vocals throughout as well. Your flow is nice for the beat but you seem to sound a little mechanical. Try to just let it flow a little and not try to chop every syllable. Just pronounce the syllables. It really doesn't sound that bad with this song though. Your vocals sound a little too highpitched for this beat too.......maybe a little too soft. You start to lose your flow a little in the third verse too......I feel where you were taking this song, but you should have ended the song with the chorus again or maybe just fade the beat out a little......anyway, the song was pretty good overall, just needs a little polishing ™

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