Voted For: Spoken Word

don't mean to be rude but - i'll simply smash you dude.
cuz the only way you steaming a-head is giving it inna boiler room.
aight opener 6/10
you're weak & fragile guy - i'll crack you when you smile.
wackness for you would be a country - if it was state of mind.
what dont rhyme that good but nice concept 4/10
my verse'll reap hell - i mean Spoken is garbage s'why he smell.
you see, i don't have to distribute computers to hand you de/ll's.
nice closer and wordplay 8/10

VS.

Sorry nomak, im posting now, Cuz im a little pressed for time
This fake mc, 'Got in way over his head' like an 'entrance sign'
ok nice opener 6/10
Im not gonna be nice, I got a wide range of artillery man
Nomak'll get 'Fed Ex' And i aint talking about a delivery van*
kinda of played wit the fed ex 4/10
You knew the outcome, Why would you battle this vet
I got a deal coming soon, But you still collabing in text
....lol good closer 8/10

Both of u had almost the same thing nic eopener but a weak line and then a nic epunchline for the closer.....both of u did good and its very close to decide but my v/ goin to SW had a better flow to it and really thats it uz it was a close battle both had punches and wordplay went more to N but SW just had a better flow makin the verse easier to handle and read....so nice battle......v/ SW

RTF.....wit a battle..... links in my sig.....or vote gets removed...

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