Voted For: Chief

takin my lines..like my 'spit' caught in ya thorat/
this nigga chief pm me beggin for a vote/...he caught!
.....aight opener weak thoguh 2/10
like we curing cancer my niggas 'jump for joy'/*
ya mom..she mad talkin bout she should of sold-ya-boy,(souljaBoy)
....weak concept 2/10
if you worked at Mcdonalds you couldn't be a 'M.C.'/
you a ol head on the board n still tryin to herb newbies/
...lol nice punch 6/10
this verse is charity like lil kids on the corner sellin lemonade/
if you owned a cadilac you still wouldn't be able to escolayde
aight nice but kinda played though 4/10
ya crew is a joke...they flow as good as a waste pipe/
chief get R.iped like toilet paper cuz his crew is full of A.ss W.ipes...
aight good....closer 6/10

Total.....20/50.....not that good man u need to work on ur punches and the delivery to ur lines so they can connect and use better concepts on it as well u have a nice flow wit this vverse but can be better.....keep it up u got potential.....


Ayo, I stand tall, it’s like I’m a “tennis ball” and you be
A tennis player with a “broken wrist” who can’t “serve me”
....lol good opener... 6/10
Ain’t no way you can see me visually and lyrically I’ll eat ya
See, facial clues gave me the idea, now “eye” “nose” I beat ya
wack concept but pulled it out though 4/10
I’ve known him from RW, I was ranked lower, this is my time to hate
Your “name” is the big question, now when “chood” he elevate?
ok kinda forced there 4/10
This is just a game of baseball and you’re the first to get hit
Only time you “succeed” is when you eating “pips”
....lol nice wordplay i get it... 6/10
I’ve been travelling and capturing many people on the map
And you resemble a “state” from the way I “tour” you in half
...lol nice closer..6/10

TOTAL 28/50......ok u did good here nice verse.....u got some punches here and there and well connected and nice worplay as well.....keep it up....u did good try to work a lil on vocab aight.....and thats all u did good.....

v// Sheif....jus a better verse wit more punches nad wordplay.....good battle keep them up and keep elevatin both

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