beat is coo...voice is coo.....need to work on your delivery and emotion some man...flow is ok....could use improvement in a couple parts.......hook...ehh im not really feelin it much...work on your breath control a lil....i can hear you takin deep breaths after every couple words....

overall its not a bad track....add some effects to the hook...make it different from the verses...

please leave feed on.....The Perfect Woman...thanks

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