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Voted For: Madik
you had better structure and flows with a weak closing but thats alright u just need to elevate just a tiny bit....but your opening was tight........
Thassarap tried to achieve doin wordplay but dint actually achieve that goal....but your puches were hard but structure needed elevation.....so does your multis and shit......
MY OVERALL BOTE IS TO MaDiK
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