Voted For: 9th Degree

hmm

elooch....i liked a bunch of your concepts, but i felt your wording was just terrible, and really took away from the punch......closer was pimp, but you didn't keep that consistency through your whole verse, flow was off.......and again, wording was just waay off and really upset a bunch of punches, but i feel if you wrote every line like your closer, you woulda taken this.

9th, nice verse, started off real nice, 2nd bar, meh.......3rd was original and nice, and closer was decent......but you kept consistency the whole way through, more creative punches i though, and wording/wordplay was down and really brought effectiveness to your punches.....and that why you get my vote

overall, it was a decent battle, but i'm giving it to 9th

v/9th Degree

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